Is this NOT a Writer/Editor’s Nightmare (Quick post)

This is a sentence from the insurance book:

 

“‘Basic property insurance’ means insurance against direct loss to real or tangible personal property at a fixed location from perils insured under the standard fire policy and extended coverage endorsement and vandalism and malicious mischief and such other insurance coverages as may be added with respect to such property by the industry placement facility with the approval of the commissioner or by the commissioner, but shall not include insurance on automobile or farm risks.”

 

WHY IS THIS SENTENCE, THIS ONE, SINGLE SENTENCE, SEVENTY-FOUR WORDS LONG??????? WTFLIP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! HOW AM I SUPPOSED TO RETAIN A SEVENTY-FOUR WORDS LONG SENTENCE????? CAN YOU BREAK THAT UP SOME???? YOU CAN’T EVEN ADD A SEMI-COLON????? WHAT IS THIS?????? I’M GOING TO NEED YOU TO DO BETTER!!!!! SEVENTY-FOUR WORDS LONG….FAIL….FRIGGIN GRAMMAR FAIL!

 

 

 

……smh…That is all…..

Cover For My Book

Hey guys….

So it’s 3:31am and im still up, reading others’ blogs and trying to get my network on when the cover of my book hit me. do you know what the problem is? I CAN’T DRAW FOR CRAP!!!! like really, it’s so bad, it’s laughable. I’m just thankful to God that I have two bffs that can draw really well. I don’t want them to see it, though. they will laugh…they will laugh long and hard….and they probably won’t stop laughing for awhile. but hey, i laughed at it. lol.

The more thought i put into this book, the more excited im getting. but my problem is i don’t focus on one part at a time. i like to see the whole thing laid out: what is the entire book about? how am i going to publish? should i self publish? how much will it cost?…..all these things that distract me from the main thing- writing!

Ok, ok….i need to be going to bed soon. good night guys! =)

May God Bless You!

Tori

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Stop Wishing Me Happy Holidays!!!! >-(

Hey blog world,

Haven’t written in awhile, I know. I actually planned on writing tomorrow when I started working on my book again, but I just am a little irritated right now.

Why, oh why, do you (directed towards anyone who does this) continue to wish my a happy w/e when you know for the past 3yrs I haven’t celebrated anything other than my birthday???? like i don’t understand…what is so difficult to grasp about it? just because most of society keeps Sunday worship or Thanksgiving or Christmas, NONE of which are Biblical, that means I have to? Excuse me???

I don’t impose my beliefs on anyone, you know? I tell you what it is, especially if you ask me because anything that I say that have to do with holidays is historically based. The last book of the Bible (Revelation) was written between 95-106AD- any kind of thing that came after that is NOT Biblical. It just isn’t. I’m sorry if you feel like since many people have been going to church on sundays for thousands of yrs now or keeping christmas or things like that, but it has NOTHING to do with the true God. The Bible even says that there are two Jesuses- there’s THE Jesus and A Jesus that people make up. Christmas, Sunday, communion, etc are from A JESUS, not THE JESUS. THE JESUS kept Saturday worship. THE JESUS kept the Passover and the other six feasts that God put into place from the Old Testament to the New Testament. THE JESUS told His disciples to do the things He did and the early Christians did just that- they kept the Sabbath Day on Saturday, the kept Passover and the other feasts. They did the things just as Jesus commanded them. The only reason these laws were changed (Sunday, communion, Easter) was because the Roman Catholic Church teamed up with the Romans during the Dark Ages and anyone who didn’t do as they commanded were completely slaughtered.

I’m sorry but just because YOU say it’s right bc of whatever reason you’d like to justify DOESN’T MEAN IT IS!!!! Black is black and white is white- don’t try to convince me it’s purple! The problem is, people do things because it’s convenient for them or because for so many generations they did it another way and that’s fine. Your salvation is just that- yours. And mine is mine, but I’m not going to base my salvation on falsehood and lies. I’m sorry but I won’t.

And just like you don’t want to listen to me, even though what I say is true, don’t expect me to listen to your lies. I’m sorry to call it that, but Christmas, Easter, Thanksgiving, Sunday worship, cross reverence, communion, and ANYTHING else you can think of is FAKE and I WILL NOT celebrate it, so PLEASE STOP SAYING HAPPY WHATEVER!!!!!

::rant complete::

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Time to Whip My Butt in Shape!

Hey All!!!

So things have been stressful lately but things are slowly (SLOWLY) getting better, so now I can get back to taking care of me. =)

I’ve had Insanity Asylum since it first came out, but I’ve never successfully finished it. As a matter of fact, I’ve never finished regular Insanity all the way through. Smh. Things like that make me think I won’t finish this book. -_- I never see things all the way through. After going to Embry Riddle for 4.5yrs, I was on my last semester and was short 10k so I couldn’t keep going there. Came home and started doing online school but because I was so discouraged from Riddle, I never finished. I published a poetry book a couple of years ago but never promoted it so it never went anywhere. I make goals and NEVER keep them. ugh…..I can be such a failure sometimes.

 

The only thing I can say I continue to do is go to Church…but I think that’s only be default because every church that I’ve ever been to other than this one has been false. Honestly, my church is the  ONLY true church (sorry if I’ve offended anyone- msg me and I’ll be glad to show you through the Bible why I’ve made such a bold statement), so it’s like if I leave, where will I go? To a church that keeps Sunday service, not Saturday- the Sabbath day? A church that celebrates pagan holidays (Christmas, Easter, Thanksgiving, etc) rather than keep the Passover and the other 6 feasts of God? Come on. I love it though. Only because of the power of the Holy Spirit and the love of God the Father and God the Mother I am able to continue going, being the only thing I am carrying out all the way through

…..I digress…..

 

Anyway, so I’m going to do an Asylum/running hybrid starting tonight. My neighborhood is a smidge bit ghetto, so I won’t run at night but I will start waking up earlier. Which, that’s a task in itself because I never wake up earlier than I have to. >_< Oye….please pray for me folks…I gotta get back into shape. I would like to fit into this one mini skirt I always wore in high school. I would never wear it outside again because I’ve given up my ho ways (lol) but I just want to be able to say I fit that, oh yeah! lol.

Ok, well, let me start. =/ later guys. I hope everyone’s weekend is amazingly blessed. Thanks to all the veterans out there btw! My momma is a vet, so I have the utmost respect for you guys! For everyone, like myself, who has tomorrow off, make the most of your day. And for those who don’t, keep grinding! =)

May God Bless You All!

Tori

Writing and Stress- Not a Bad Combo

Hey all!

 

So I finally finished the 4th chapter- something I’ve been working on for like 3 days. I would either get too sleepy to write or I just wouldn’t have anything to say. But honestly, I’ve been so stressed out over my financial situation that when I do write, I get lost in it, just like if I was reading a book. I’m fasting and praying, hoping and believing that things will work out by tomorrow (rent day). >_<

 

I have never been through this kind of hardship before, you know. It’s just so….much. So much. I am barely coping honestly. But thank God I have been writing because when I actually do, I find myself completely engrossed in it.

 

Engrossed….that’s a word I feel I should use in chapter 5. I will make a point to do so.

 

Sigh….I’m trying to put all my trust and faith in God, you know? I don’t know what anyone else’s beliefs are, but from the Bible and science, we can understand we’re living in the last days. Therefore, I know Satan is just pissy that his time is short so he’s messing with me…it’s quite irritating, let me tell you. But if he’s anything at all, he’s consistent…I’ll give him that…the bastard…

 

Anyway, other than my life crumpling around me, I’m becoming very proud of my book. Actually because of all the pain going on in my life, it allowed me to write an extremely dramatic scene to end chapter 4. I’m pretty excited for my team (aka my HS besties) to read it and let me know what I should add or take away.

 

I hope everyone else’s life is doing better than mine. =) Though misery loves company, I do pray for everyone to be doing better than I am. Through your good fortune that God blesses you with, I can be encouraged. I love you all!

 

May God Bless You!

Tori